I think that what you typed was actually very logical.
But, consider this, what if you were to create a awesome headline?
I am not saying your information is not solid., however what if you added
something that makes people want more? I mean Wisconsin Care
Alliances is kinda vanilla. You could peek at Yahoo's home page and
see how they write news headlines to grab people to click.
You might try adding a video or a picture or two to get readers interested about everything've written. Just
my opinion, it would make your website a little
bit more interesting.