I think that what you posted made a bunch of sense. However, think on this,
suppose you added a little content? I mean, I don't want to tell you how to
run your blog, however what if you added something to maybe get
a person's attention? I mean Birmingham City Wide Care Alliance is a little plain. You might peek at Yahoo's front page and note how they write news titles
to grab viewers to click. You might add a video or a picture or two to get people interested about what you've got to say.
In my opinion, it would bring your blog a little
livelier.