I believe what you posted was very reasonable. But, what about this?
what if you added a little information? I ain't suggesting your content isn't good,
but suppose you added something to maybe grab people's attention? I mean St Louis MO
City Wide Care Alliances is kinda plain. You should glance at
Yahoo's front page and see how they write article titles to grab
people to open the links. You might add a related video or a picture
or two to grab readers excited about what you've written.
Just my opinion, it could make your posts a little livelier.