I believe everything said made a ton of sense.
But, what about this? suppose you wrote a catchier title?
I am not saying your content is not solid., but what if you added something that grabbed folk's attention? I mean Detroit
MI Care Alliances is kinda plain. You should look at Yahoo's home page and note how they create post headlines to grab viewers to open the links.
You might add a related video or a related picture or two to grab people excited
about what you've written. In my opinion, it would bring your posts
a little livelier.