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about this, what if you added a little content? I am not suggesting your content isn't solid., however what if you added something that
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You could look at Yahoo's front page and see how they create news headlines to grab viewers interested.
You might try adding a video or a pic or two to get readers
interested about everything've got to say. In my opinion, it would make your website a little livelier.