I think that what you posted was actually very reasonable.
However, think on this, what if you added a little information? I am not saying your information isn't good, but suppose you added something that makes people
want more? I mean North Carolina Care Alliances is kinda plain. You ought to peek at Yahoo's front page and watch how they create article headlines to grab people interested.
You might add a related video or a picture or two to
get people interested about what you've got to say. Just my
opinion, it would make your website a little livelier.